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"C'mon! Open this door! It's been a day that you don't come out!" Jeff was knocking at Jack's room, trying to make him get out. After what happened the last day, Jeff haven't managed to talk to Jack, and it was making him nervous. Thought, if he could talk to Jack he wouldn't know what to say. "Hey! Are you angry for yesterday? C'mon, I'm sorry.." He was shouting, and after some minutes he tried again to knock at the door. "What you want?" Jack opened a little the door, without letting Jeff come in. "What I want? Hey! You've been in this damned room for a day! I had to be alone all this time! And, I wanted to say you that I'm sorry for what happened.. I didn't know what I was doin'." Jack opened fully the door and got out. Then, without saying something else to Jeff, went downstairs. "Sigh.. I made a very big mistake..".
Jeff followed Jack downstair, and then looked him take a bag, that put on his back. "Are you going out?" Jeff asked him staying at the door of the living room where Jack was taking his bag. "Yes, any problem?" "No, I think." "Hear me Jeff: I don't know at what you were thinking yesterday, but I don't want to see you for a while.. I'm sorry, I'm a little confused this time." Jack was acting very weird, and on Jeff's face was a sad expression. He couldn't believe that Jack was trying to avoid him. He stared at Jack, until he got out from the house closing the main entrance door. "Daymn, I don't want that he's mad at me. He's acting.. so strange. Maybe there's something else that bother him." Jeff after a while decided to follow him secretly, for see what's wrong with his friend.
It was day, and Jeff noticed that Jack was going into the forest. It was a very quiet place, actually no one was in there, neither SlenderMan. So, Jeff continued follow Jack staying a lot distant from him. Jack walked for a lot in the forest, without noticing Jeff behind him. It was seeming that Jack wasn't having a specific destination. After sometime of walking, Jeff saw Jack going in a zone where trees were becoming more and more, but continued following him, wandering what was he doing. [Maybe he want only stay a little alone, in this quiet place far from home, and from me..] Jeff started think, and thought that maybe he should go back at home. But he didn't, and continued to walk after Jack. From afar, Jeff saw Jack sitting on the shore of a little lake, and took from his bag an mp3 player. He put one of the headphones on, and started the player. [Is he hearing at music? Here?] Jeff decided to go up on a tree, and watch Jack from there. He was enjoying the quiet place, and so was doing Jack. After a while, Jeff heard Jack talking to himself. "What's this feeling, I never had it before.. Jeff is my best friend, how could he do that? It's so awkward.." His voice was very low, and from that Jeff understood that he was very confused. "Do I.. feel something special for him? Thinking at it.. I liked when he kissed me.. Did I.. fell in love, with my best friend?" Jack was holding his chest, and under his mask his face was turning red. Jeff, hearing those words, gasped, and lost the balance on the tree, so he fell down. He did a lot of noise, and Jack heard that, so he turned behind him for see that Jeff was there. He took off his headphone, and started shouthing. "What the fuck are you doing here?? Weren't you at home?" "Wait! Calm down EJ!" "I WON'T calm down! Why would you do that?!" "I said, calm down! I saw you were acting strange, so I wanted to see what's wrong with you, I thought that coming to know I could to help you!" "Well, you're not helping me! Go away, leave me alone!" Jack was very angry, and saying that started walk away around the lake. "Wait! All that you said, was all.. true?" Jack stopped and turned to Jeff. "Did.. did you hear all what I said? Oh, fuck.." Jack put his hands on his hair, and started to scratch embarassed. "I.. I hate you! I can't believe you followed me here, and that you heard what I was saying!" "Aww C'mon! First of all you were talking to yourself, tell me if that's normal!" "I do it usually, I like think at high voice! And you have no raison to judge me!" "WILL YOU PLEASE SHUT UP JUST FOR A SECOND?!" Jeff ran towards him, and grabbed him from his arm. Jack was scared, he thought Jeff would hurt him. Jeff was having a very angry expression on his face, and raised his arm. Strongly he removed Jack's mask, breaking the wire, and then got his face close to Jack's.
At least, in that way Jeff managed to get Jack shut up.
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Yeeeeey I did a second part :dummy:
I will make the chapter of this story very short, because I put a lot of time to think what to write. I neither know for how long I will continue it xD
I totally LOVE this couple, and it don't receive too much love! D:

For make you know, between " " are things that character say, and between [ ] will be what characters thinks.
Hope you like, and maybe I will do more :la:

Jeff | Jack (c) CreepyPasta
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Iammeepster Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015  New member Student
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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SketchNote598 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I ship it! :)
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chaoticwafflez25 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
I ship it >\\\<
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CaramellCat1998 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Im more with Jeffx L.J , but thats cute and well written, I like it :3
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II-edison-II Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I ship it!
Still :XD:
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XxMelissa-StarxX Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
I'm not a fan of JeffxE.J but this story is  :D COOL
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LitleSlend Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh god... its da best fanfic ever wrote!! w
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rockbk Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
.... no just.... no...
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pretzelpie Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Duuude... You have NO idea how long I've been looking for this.... Ehehe.... -I'm not high.-
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BethanyDrowned Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
LOL
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JeffxBen1234 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
Omg Jeff ...!
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DevilEnderGirl Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
MOAR!
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GrimmjowYaoi Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
Please do more! The only other fic I've been able to find of JeffxJack is Jack's Terrible Idea on fanfiction.net, and I -need- this pairing!!!! So please write more!!!
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Glasses-Silver Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
Ok, I'll write more if you like it ;u;
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GrimmjowYaoi Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
Please do!!
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Mudana-dokuso Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE :highfive:
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Glasses-Silver Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
I'll try to do more ^^
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Mudana-dokuso Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay:eager: this is the only jeffXjack story i found
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Glasses-Silver Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
it's because of that I did it xD
No one wasn't writing something about my fav couple ;u;
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Mudana-dokuso Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i know theres only two stories of this couple i love this couple why does nobody do this couple they make creepypasta so cwute but so creepy
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Damian-Fluffy-Doge Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
more please >w<
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Jane0The0Killer Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
I'm coming for you Jeff, just wait.
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HisFavoriteDarkAngel Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
NOOO! Me loves this couple! :,3 Thank you so much for writing these! Me appreciate it!
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Glasses-Silver Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
I'm glad you like it ;v;
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I-Am-Eyeless-Jack Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
I think that you are a very talented writer and I am looking forward to the next one! :D It is wonderful...
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Glasses-Silver Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
thank you QvQ
Thank you also for the watch >w<
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I-Am-Eyeless-Jack Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
You're welcome for both! ^_^
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Jane0The0Killer Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
Oooooooooo drama dram dram XD
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Glasses-Silver Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
xD
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skylarluna Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
ASDFGHJKL I LOVE IT OWO PLZ NAKE MOAR!!!!!!! ^w^
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Glasses-Silver Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
glad you like >w<
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